Outstanding.  There is some really powerful emoting going on, mostly in body language, that makes use of the digital format beautifully.  There was some sophisticated stuff going on in there, like Galahad once he knows he's alone and his "mask" drops. Nocturnas' acting with body language was also great, withdrawing his hand and blinking.

I'll be honest, your choice to go with no internal dialogue has worked out really well.  Plus, it helps that the artist is really good with helping the characters emote through motion, so to speak.

All in all, a very compelling episode.